Dystopia

•  While I disagree with the thesis it is sound out line. The example could be stronger, more specific evidence
• -What about the C-51?
• -What about the innocent Canadians torture by the government- even it not innocent they would have be tortured (against democracy( for their beliefs, rather than their actions (against fairness and rule of law)?
• https://www.google.ca/search?q=Canadians+tortured+by+govemmetns&ie=utf-8&oe=utf-8&gws_rd=cr&ei=wO-4Vv3GNo35eN3MrtAO
•  But none of these can not be added later of course, but certainly you a thesis means you you have done some research, and not just made up stuff up in your head - that the proto-qustion or thesis question
•  Thesis Question: With C-51 the and other factors how close it Canada to a 1984/Brave new World. Have Canadians become willing slaves without realizing it?
•  You see to still by at the question stage/